Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ Although your canon point is at the end of season two, after Scott has come to terms with the fact that he's a werewolf, his emotional and physical transformation is still one of the main driving forces behind his character arc and the show as a whole. It has a major effect on both Scott's personality and on the characters he surrounds himself with on a daily basis. Please expand more on his relationship to his lycanthropy, and how it affects those around him! ◆ Additionally, you mention Scott relying on his friends for help, but not who those friends are, how they interact with each other, or what kind of help he receives from them. Please elaborate more on Scott's interactions with the rest of the cast—especially about his relationships with Stiles and Allison, two characters he is exceptionally close to. ◆ Finally, please run your application through a grammar-checker before submitting it again, as we noticed a recurring and consistent problem with sentence fragments in the app.
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