We apologize, but your application has been declined. While basic aspects are pointed out in her personality section, we find they are too generic to provide an accurate analysis of Rebecca’s personality. Simple adjectives such as intelligent or determined, for example, are not elaborated upon and without context could be attributed to any character. Your canon examples were specific but failed to demonstrate such multifaceted characteristics and instead left us with a one dimensional impression of Rebecca. The same holds true for her strengths and weaknesses. Elements such as a familiarity with biochemistry were listed but weren’t reflected adequately in her history section.
If you do choose to reapply, we would strongly suggest further reflection on her personality, history and strengths/weaknesses to contribute to a more comprehensive and cohesive application. Thank you for your interest in Ataraxion, and we hope you consider us in the future!
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We apologize, but your application has been declined. While basic aspects are pointed out in her personality section, we find they are too generic to provide an accurate analysis of Rebecca’s personality. Simple adjectives such as intelligent or determined, for example, are not elaborated upon and without context could be attributed to any character. Your canon examples were specific but failed to demonstrate such multifaceted characteristics and instead left us with a one dimensional impression of Rebecca. The same holds true for her strengths and weaknesses. Elements such as a familiarity with biochemistry were listed but weren’t reflected adequately in her history section.
If you do choose to reapply, we would strongly suggest further reflection on her personality, history and strengths/weaknesses to contribute to a more comprehensive and cohesive application. Thank you for your interest in Ataraxion, and we hope you consider us in the future!