Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ We’d like to request a new third person sample, focusing on something other than the character’s introduction to the Tranquility, as we would like to see a stronger and clearer example of Galadriel’s motivations and voice. A link to something you have written before is perfectly acceptable here. ◆ We would also like to request a longer first person sample. A link to an entry or comments you have written before is perfectly acceptable here. ◆ Finally, Nenya’s powers will still need to be dampened further to qualify for the setting. If you would like to discuss suggestions for its limitations, feel free to simply make a note of your ideas and we’d be happy to discuss options! Alternately, you may choose to remove Nenya from Galadriel's inventory.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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