Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ We'd like to see an expansion or addendum to Kirk's personality section focusing on his developmental arc during both movies, with a particular focus on Kirk learning humility and how to accept responsibility for his actions.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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