Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ While Tony's canon personality section is thorough, we'd like to see a more comprehensive explanation of his CR AU. How is the Tony Stark who spent a year in Exsilium different from the canonical version? What events and people in Exsilium had a lasting impact on him? Given that Tony is a character whose life is inextricaly interlinked with technology, how, if at all, has his technopathy affected him? ◆ We'd also like to request a more solid explanation of Tony's technopathy; we'd like to see a bit more specific detail on what it can do and what its limits are.
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