Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ Given your canon point is listed as the end of Season 1, we would like to see more coverage in the personality section of Will's declining mental health and his reaction to the revelations of the season finale.
◆ In addition, we would also like an expansion of the history section to better reflect this canon point.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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