◆ While your personality thoroughly covers Sansa's early traits, we feel that the changes she undergoes by the time of your chosen canon-point, as well as some of her darker flaws, are not sufficiently covered. We would like to see revisions that include (but do not have to be limited to) analysis of the use of femininity and manipulation in her interactions with Ser Dontos, Sandor Clegane, and perhaps also Tyrion; her complicated relationship with Cersei as a female role model, captor, and rival; and most importantly, her Alayne persona. We would specifically like to see these revisions focus on further elaboration on Sansa’s psychological profile and character traits rather than strictly recounting the events of the series.