◆ While we understand that OCs coming from tabletop campaigns can often have a convoluted history dictated by the dice and system, we'd love to see more detail in Lysander's adventures set in stone, for example, such massive undertakings as his ascension to the throne has no more than a sentence. Without a canon source for us to check, the information you provide us is the only context we have for these events.
◆ We would also like to see an expansion of Lysander's personality, which is shorter than we would usually like for an Original Character. Specifically, we would like a focus on his weaknesses, flaws, and negative traits. While we appreciate you nerfing his powers, we would still like to see an analysis laid out of a well rounded and believable character.