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axmods. ([personal profile] ataraxites) wrote 2013-11-08 06:08 am (UTC)

REVIS̶I̸O̸N̴S̸.

R E V I S I O N S .
Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ Chekhov's written "voice" and diction lack his vocal tics and sentence structure. While you obviously have a grasp on the character, we would like to see a new first person/comms sample that gives a better demonstration of your understanding of Chekhov's way of speaking. Linking us to a previously played thread is acceptable in this case.
◆ Similarly, we would like a new third person sample that utilizes Chekhov's internal motivations and way of composing sentences within the narration, preferably one set within the context of the Ataraxion setting.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!

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