◆ Overall, your application is too short and does not demonstrate enough character analysis or a strong enough understanding of character voice to be accepted at this time. We’d also strongly recommend citing specific canon examples to illustrate your points, rather than using broad generalizations.
◆ Although Elizabeth’s canon point in this application is from a very early point in the game, the events of Bioshock Infinite do drastically change her. We’d like to see an understanding of how the events of the game influence her and how she’s developed over the course of the game in your personality section.
◆ We would also like more detail about Elizabeth’s relationships with the people around her. Booker is the most obvious place to start, as they are companions throughout the game, but we’d also like more discussion of her relationships with Songbird and Zachary Hale + Lady Comstock.
◆ Finally, we’d like to see new samples, as we did not get a good sense of Elizabeth’s character voice or motivations from the samples provided.