Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ We require a new first personal/comms sample, as one of the mods is unable to view the picture on the hosting site. A reminder that we also require mod permission to have been asked and granted prior to applying in order to link previous posts (or screencaps of previous posts). ◆ We would also like extensive revisions to Castiel's personality, specifically an examination of his season six motivations, his development away from his black/white worldview as of his canonpoint, and his relationships with other key characters in the series, particularly Sam and Dean. ◆ We are also going to need to further limit and nerf his powers. We are open to discussion and negotiation on these points, but currently we feel he is still too overpowered compared to the other residents of the ship. Our suggestions are as follows: Teleportation will be limited to places within sight. He will not be able to have invisibility, invulnerability, or smiting. His strength and perception will be halved. We would like you to edit and revise his abilities section to reflect these or further limitations.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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