◆ Luthien's powers will be severely limited by the ship, as a result of being cut off from nature and due to the fact that Ataraxion automatically nerfs powers to at least half-strength. We would therefore like to see power revisions reflecting this fact, written by you rather than us. (The standard elf abilities are fine.)
◆ We're concerned that the personality section is the shortest part of this app, and would like to see significant expansions to it. Specifically, we would like to see more weaknesses: while we know that Luthien isn't strictly human, we feel that there should be a "humanized" element to her psychology that should allow you to give her a more realistic set of flaws.
◆ Finally, we would like to know more about your thoughts on Luthien's suitability for a psychological horror game and the development you intend to give her. This can take the form of an essay-like explanation of any length (like the personality/history sections) or you can revise or rewrite either of your samples to better reflect your intentions and her likely reaction to the game. Please contact the mods if you would like a link to a previous plot to use as a specific scenario prompt.