Thank you for your feedback! I have modified the title of the app to include a trigger warning.
I'd be happy to make revisions and I get where you're coming from, what with wanting to see more detail about her internal states in the background and coherency in the personality section. Selective memory shouldn't be much of a problem for her day-to-day (night by night) behavior, more of your typical cat's refusal to admit mistakes, some trauma repression, etc. I would certainly like to work on that more-- as well as the samples (aaa i hated them).
However, there's just one point I'd really appreciate your further clarification on, before I revise (or not). Were there specific concepts in the app that you felt tipped the app over the line into World of Darkness territory? I know next to nothing about the Nosferatu in WoD, so any guidance on how to separate it out would be helpful. Thanks!
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Thank you for your feedback! I have modified the title of the app to include a trigger warning.
I'd be happy to make revisions and I get where you're coming from, what with wanting to see more detail about her internal states in the background and coherency in the personality section. Selective memory shouldn't be much of a problem for her day-to-day (night by night) behavior, more of your typical cat's refusal to admit mistakes, some trauma repression, etc. I would certainly like to work on that more-- as well as the samples (aaa i hated them).
However, there's just one point I'd really appreciate your further clarification on, before I revise (or not). Were there specific concepts in the app that you felt tipped the app over the line into World of Darkness territory? I know next to nothing about the Nosferatu in WoD, so any guidance on how to separate it out would be helpful. Thanks!