Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ Please expand on events and Harry's role in them in your History. ◆ Further discussion of Harry's heroism throughout the film in his personality, particularly the moments where he puts himself in harms way to help others, and the commitment to the case. ◆ Expansion of the personality in general, exploring a few of the traits you've listed with more depth of analysis. ◆ Not revisions, but while we have you: the number 008 has already been taken for this round. We've held 080 for you, but feel free to include a new number in your response if you'd prefer.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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