Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ We would like to see more in-depth analysis of Peter's personality. If you're unsure where to start, we would suggest further elaboration on his dynamic with other characters, and/or a discussion of several important moments in his life and how his reaction to them illustrates his personality. While his canon point is somewhat early, you're welcome to draw on future events in canon to explore how he might respond to the game's environment.
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