Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ While your personality section gives a good overview of Giulietta's character, we would like a more expanded look at the traits you have written about. Some suggestions would be: ◆ Her manner and beliefs seem out of keeping with what would be expected from women in her time period: does she have many difficulties or conflicts? Has she struggled to develop this attitude? How does this effect her? ◆ A better insight into how the traumatic events of her life have impacted and changed her and her life, her own thoughts regarding this, and how she reconciles her need for vengeance with her strong faith. ◆ Her relationships with other characters, such as her attitude towards and perception of Romeo, or any other characters she may interact with in canon.
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