Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ While your personality section gives a good coverage of Ginny's traits, we would like a general expansion that gives more depth of character analysis and reasoning. ◆ Your abilities section is a little shorter than we're comfortable accepting at this point. While we don't need a encyclopaedic explanation of HP-verse magic, we would like a more thorough expansion here, as well a better look at Ginny's proficiency and weaknesses as a witch. ◆ We would like a new log sample that shows a better understanding of Ataraxion's game setting, and demonstrates more potential interactivity in play.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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