Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ We would like more expansion upon Emily's personality, with a focus on what changes — and what doesn't — between low-chaos and high-chaos playthroughs, and what those changes say about Emily as a person. ◆ We would also like more expansion upon her boldness and resourcefulness, as well as more elaboration as to how she views and approaches obstacles and adverse conditions.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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