◆ The revisions provided do not sufficiently reflect a thorough knowledge of Emily’s characterization or the canon as a whole. While we understand that you are not applying for the character from a High Chaos playthrough, information is disseminated in that version of the game that does not become clear in Low Chaos, and the inherent potential for those decisions develops Emily into a more substantial character than this application reflects. Her personality section needs to be expanded to include a more thorough explanation of the character traits demonstrated in the history section and a more specific description of how Low Chaos Emily differs from her High Chaos counterpart.