Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ While your application is very strong, we'd like to see an expanded look at some aspects of Alison's personality. This should include an examination of her attitude and guilt regarding Aynsley's death and how this has impacted her, as well as her using alcohol as a coping mechanism. ◆ We would also like to see more about her specific relationships with other characters, including Beth, the other clones, Donnie, and Felix. ◆ Your samples show a great grasp of voice and internal motivation, but as you've noted Alison's skills as an actress to be so crucial to her character, we'd like to see more narrative describing body language or tone of voice. You can amend your current samples for this, write fresh ones, or if you'd like, link us to an existing thread.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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