Thank you for applying to Ataraxion! Before we can make a final decision on your application, however, we would like to see revisions on the following.
◆ While your application gives us a good general look at Rex, we would like to see an expanded personality section with deeper and broader character analysis and reasoning behind why Rex is the way he is. ◆ Some aspects touched on in your application that we would suggest to be included in this: how he managed to hold onto his heart and compassion despite his background; his attitude regarding his amnesia; his relationship with Providence and why he continues to go back to him; why his abilities are impacted by his emotional state and how this is related to his self-worth.
Please reply with the necessary information within 72 hours. If you require an extension, please contact a mod before your time expires. Thank you!
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